Safar..
Nazar ki baat thi, asar ki baat thi
Jajbaaton ke safar ki baat thi
Khoya khoya sa main ghar se chala tha
Mere zehan mein jaane kidhar ki baat thi
Dil uski gali tak to le pahuncha tha mujhe
uska darwaza khatkhataana jigar ki baat thi
Bikhri zulfein, alsaayi aankhein uski dekhi.n
Shaamo.n se hasii.n us dopahar ki baat thi
Badi der tak chali guftagu us.se
Puraane waqt si hi naye shahar ki baat thi
Black Jack
divesha
The Rest of Me
vibubhav
T.I.
Goodfellas 
all the best for the new blog- liked the goodfellas inspired tagline !
your urdu vocab is getting very impressive (also noticed the recent ones on your introvert blog)…somehow the language suits your thoughts…
[jajbaaton = jazbaaton]
“Ki humm gazal roz padhna chahte the paar kya karte shehar bahut masroof the…”
Dil uski gali tak to le pahuncha tha mujhe
uska darwaza khatkhataana jigar ki baat thi
beautiful…..beautiful….beautiful
😉
awesome blog n brilliant verses..way to go
Doesn’t this one sound incomplete?
[Siyaah]
But my earlier poems used to be have better ideas. 🙂
[Shival]
Wonderful words yar!
[Black Jack]
Thank u!
[Desperado]
🙂 A long way to go, in fact.
[Divesh]
Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost! 😉
Waiting for the remaining ‘picture’
“Puraane waqt si hi naye shahar ki baat thi”
somehow hate writing in english here but i can’t do verses in hindi…
this one here’s just what i needed!
🙂